Amendment 1
Clear headings and bulleted lists make the letter easier to read and to understand.

Amendment 2
Abbreviation 'res' removed.

Amendment 3
List of contents is on the front page so student can find out easily if something is missing.

Amendment 4
Messages about expiry date are in one place clearer and more helpful.

Amendment 5
No ambiguity about need for payment.

Amendment 6
Instructions are clear, in order, and in one place.

Amendment 7
Student is warned if there is something on the next page.